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Saturday 3 March 2018

IELTS WRITING TASK 2:- Everyone should stay in school until the age of 18 eighteen. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Everyone should stay in school until the age of 18 eighteen. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Answer:-

Education is a weapon that has power to change the thinking of a person. Education starts from the birth of a child and remains with him till his death. Every child learns basic education from school which is like second home after his own house as in school strong foundation of learning is laid. Owing to its too much importance, citizens and I believe that one should learn in school until 18 years old.

To commence with the first and foremost point, school is a place where an educate first learns discipline which is learnt by following strict timing and helpful to handle all the other chaos of life. Moreover, by sharing and communicating with learners of different caste and creed, this inculcates the feeling of brotherhood. In school, pupils not only learn about various subjects but with this, they also participate in co-curricular activities which make them physically as well as mentally fit. In addition to this, competition also helps to teach that winning is not ultimate goal, competition teaches participation also matters and failures and repeated attempts are key to success.

Further reinforcing, basic didactic helps to get job to secure future as earning bread and butter is utmost imperative to lie life. Scholars in school set their aims of life according to their interest and with the help of educators. With an aim, scholars work hard to achieve success in life. Aim and right direction keeps their mind in right direction which helps them to stay away from bad habits. Last but not the least, school study and competition are helpful in the overall development of pupils so when they get graduated from school they become mature to deal with world simply a caterpillar becomes butterfly in school.

At the tip of iceberg, education in institutes plays an indispensable role in learner's life so due to all highlighted benefits students should study in school.

Vocab:- Students- Learner, pupils, educate,scholar, tutee 

School:-Institute 

Studies:-Didactic 

Overall developments:- Holistic development, physical and mental development

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