Ielts writing task 1 general letter writing - letter to company manager to request to extend stay in USA

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Your company sent you to USA for further training. You stayed there for decided time and you want to stay there for more time. 

Write a letter to the company manager. In your letter

u have

• what you have done during the training period.

• what benefits you have received from the training

• why you want to overstay there

Answer

Dear Sir

I am writing this to request you to extend my stay in the USA. You will be happy to know that I have passed with flying colors in all my test and got appreciations from my tutors and team.

During my training, I have learnt to control electronic devices with the smart phone. This would  be helpful in our new smart home project and many more related projects. The best part of this training is the first hand experience. This, I got by working with latest electronic devices and by instructing these with my own developed codes and libraries. 

However, I could not complete the full course of 20 days due to Christmas holidays. This is the reason, I need your permission to overstay and complete my training to get a certificate that would be provided only after the completion of full course. I assure you sir, my extended stay would enrich my technical knowledge to enhance the possibilities to touch new heights in the future projects.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully 

Amanpreet Kaur

IELTS writing task 2 - Essay - Buying fashionable clothes is wasteful

Question: Buying fashionable clothes is wasteful because people don't need new clothes all the time. Clothes should be bought and used more wisely. Do you agree?

Vogue is blindly followed by people of all age groups and  income groups. Usually folks wear new clothes, accessories to attract the other gender and for this individuals have become shopaholic and continue to buy new dresses without thinking wisely, which is a wrong approach as clothes should be purchased and used more wisely as there are many reasons to support this argument.

Clothes need to be worn to cover the body and not to show status but this has become a statement in all the societies. People buy clothes without considering their budget. When they forget to cut the corner then they land themselves in the pool of troubles. For instance, when people their shipping bills with credit cards then, they have to return the actual sum with some interest to the bank, This actually leads to over expenditure and sometimes to debts. When these are difficult to pay then that bring stress.

In addition to this, people need to buy clothes not according to the trend but according to their body shapes as well as taste. A cloth which does not fits a body will make a beautiful person ugly whereas, a cloth which is very well fitted will enhance a person's personality. For example, Mallika Sherawat was highly criticized for wearing  a wrong and ill fitted dress in the 2019th Cannes festival. Individuals need to take a lesson from these incidents and buy dresses accordingly.

Hammering the last nail of the coffin, I would like to say that beauty lies in the eyes of beholder ad this is not affected by the outer appearance of the person. People need to understand that clothes are to cover the body not to reflect social status so wise decision need to be taken at the time of purchase.

IELTS- Writing task 1 - General module - Letter writing - Letter to landlord to return deposit

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

You paid a refundable deposit when you rented an apartment. You left the apartment in good condition but the landlord won’t return your deposit.

Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter

• explain why you are writing
• ask for the return of your deposit
• inform the landlord of possible legal action

Answer

Dear Sir 

I was one of your tenant who was living in Flat Number 11, New Heights. I have emptied your flat in the month of June and was waiting to get my security deposit. I have called you a number of times and your no response becomes a reason of writing you this epistle.

The flat, when I left was in very good condition. All the walls were clean and there were no dirt spots on the walls. The furniture that you gave me at the time of lease was in good condition and is not broken or damaged. So, according to lease agreement, I have to return speck and span flat to you and this is what I did. Now, it is your turn to return the favor and follow the rules.

I request you to return my deposit in some days otherwise, I will be left with only one option and I have to knock the doors of the authorities to get it. I hope you do not want me to call the copes to settle this matter. Being hopeful to get my deposit soon.

Yours sincerely

Amanpreet Kaur

IELTS Writing Task 1 - Line Graph shows monthly profit of 3 British companies

You are advised to spend a maximum of 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows the monthly profits of 3 British companies in the car retail industry for the 2000 financial year. 

Write a report for a university lecturer comparing the performance of Ace Sports Cars and Branson Motors for the period given.

You should write the report in 150 words.

The line graph delineates the profit of three British companies dealing in car industry for the financial year 200. The data is calibrated in thousands of pounds.

The leading company in the starting of financial year, 2000 was Acme Sports Car which was making approximate three times more profit than Branson Motors whose profit was 20,000 pounds. In the first quarter, former company's profit experienced an decrease but an increase in the June leads it to 80000 pounds profit while, a constant surge in profit was seen in the latter one. At the end of first quarter, tax was imposed/levied on luxury goods which negatively effect the profit of Acme Sports Car in the months between July and September and profit plummeted to 10,000 pounds and Branson earned 60000 pounds profit.

Zig-zag trend in the profit was observed in the case of Branson Motors and profit fell between 50000 pounds and 60000 pounds whereas, Acme Sports Car's profit recovered in the third quarter and reached to 20000 pounds. Media reports that happened in the stating of fourth quarter brought a boost in the economy and this positively influence profit of both the companies and ended up making Branson Motors, the most profitable company of 2000 financial year. Branson Motors and Acme Sports Car gained a profit of 60000 pounds and 40000 pounds at the end of 2000 financial year respectively/severally.

Overall, financial year 2000 was most successful for Branson Motors in comparison to Acme Sports Car that witnessed fluctuating profit.

IELTS General Writing Task 1 : Letter to friend to translate a document for you.

You need a translation of a document into a different language. You have a friend who speaks that language.

Write a letter to your friend. In you letter:
- Explain what the document is and why you need a translation
- Explain why is in urgent and important for you
- Ask your friend if and when he/she will be able to help you

Dear Grey

How are you? Hope you are pink of health and are ready to help me with your skill of translation.
You already know about my global connections and are familiar with my client Mr. John. John is helping me in expanding my business in his country, France and mostly send the requirements of clients in French language.

Recently, I got a big project to create app for one of the elite schools in France and revert is expected in 48 hours. I require your kind help in translation as I don't want to hire any other outsider for translation of five pages as he can reveal client information and data to another person and cannot say the same to my employee who translates the work as his father-in-law is severally sick. You are trustworthy for me and I know you have learned French and can do work with efficiency. Moreover, weekend will help you to translate this for me or you can suggest a possible time when you can do this work.

Hope to get your reply soon with a "Yes"

Yours truly

Amanpreet Kaur