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Monday 7 October 2019

IELTS Writing Task 1 - Line Graph shows monthly profit of 3 British companies


You are advised to spend a maximum of 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows the monthly profits of 3 British companies in the car retail industry for the 2000 financial year. 

Write a report for a university lecturer comparing the performance of Ace Sports Cars and Branson Motors for the period given.

You should write the report in 150 words.




The line graph delineates the profit of three British companies dealing in car industry for the financial year 200. The data is calibrated in thousands of pounds.

The leading company in the starting of financial year, 2000 was Acme Sports Car which was making approximate three times more profit than Branson Motors whose profit was 20,000 pounds. In the first quarter, former company's profit experienced an decrease but an increase in the June leads it to 80000 pounds profit while, a constant surge in profit was seen in the latter one. At the end of first quarter, tax was imposed/levied on luxury goods which negatively effect the profit of Acme Sports Car in the months between July and September and profit plummeted to 10,000 pounds and Branson earned 60000 pounds profit.

Zig-zag trend in the profit was observed in the case of Branson Motors and profit fell between 50000 pounds and 60000 pounds whereas, Acme Sports Car's profit recovered in the third quarter and reached to 20000 pounds. Media reports that happened in the stating of fourth quarter brought a boost in the economy and this positively influence profit of both the companies and ended up making Branson Motors, the most profitable company of 2000 financial year. Branson Motors and Acme Sports Car gained a profit of 60000 pounds and 40000 pounds at the end of 2000 financial year respectively/severally.

Overall, financial year 2000 was most successful for Branson Motors in comparison to Acme Sports Car that witnessed fluctuating profit.

Monday 30 September 2019

IELTS General Writing Task 1 : Letter to friend to translate a document for you.

You need a translation of a document into a different language. You have a friend who speaks that language.

Write a letter to your friend. In you letter:
- Explain what the document is and why you need a translation
- Explain why is in urgent and important for you
- Ask your friend if and when he/she will be able to help you

Dear Grey

How are you? Hope you are pink of health and are ready to help me with your skill of translation.
You already know about my global connections and are familiar with my client Mr. John. John is helping me in expanding my business in his country, France and mostly send the requirements of clients in French language.

Recently, I got a big project to create app for one of the elite schools in France and revert is expected in 48 hours. I require your kind help in translation as I don't want to hire any other outsider for translation of five pages as he can reveal client information and data to another person and cannot say the same to my employee who translates the work as his father-in-law is severally sick. You are trustworthy for me and I know you have learned French and can do work with efficiency. Moreover, weekend will help you to translate this for me or you can suggest a possible time when you can do this work.

Hope to get your reply soon with a "Yes"

Yours truly

Amanpreet Kaur

Tuesday 24 September 2019

IELTS General Writing Task 1 : Letter to friend to tell him about you job in new company

Question: You have recently started work in a new company.
Write a letter to your friend
In your letter -

  1. Explain why you changed job
  2. Describe your new job
  3. Tell him/her your other news


Dear Grey

Hello! Hope you are doing well and sailing in the same boat as I am. In you last letter, you have expressed your dissatisfaction and warned me to keep you updated with my life since I haven't told you about my new job. So here, this is for you.

I have recently joined a new company. You know, where I was previously working was not proper IT company as their core was Embedded Technologies. This became my reason of switching from there.

Now, I am working in proper IT company in five star hotel "Radisson". Here, I have freedom to explore my field. I am handling a module of a big project and this will be launched firstly in the UK then in other countries. These days, we are wrapping up everything as deadline is near and testing team is putting all the efforts to find bugs in our apps. Hopefully, our well oiled machine will turn this project to a big success. Rest, nothing other than job is happening in my life as this has become my front burner.
Hope this letter will satisfy you and I promise to write you fortnight to keep you up-to-date with my life. Pay my regards to dear aunt and uncle.

Yours truly

Amanpreet Kaur

Saturday 17 August 2019

IELTS Writing Task 1: Flow Chart: Paper Recycling

The flow chart below shows the process of waste paper recycling.


writing task 1 report waste paper recycling in six steps


The flow chart delineates the six steps that are performed to recycle the waste paper.

The process begins with the collections of waste paper. Papers are collected from different places some are public paper banks and businesses. The next step involves the segregation of paper by hand in this, paper is graded and the papers that are unsuitable for recycling process are discarded. Approved and graded papers are sent to paper mills for further treatment in the step known as "transportation".

In the paper mills, waste papers are cleaned, pulp is made out of it along with this the unnecessary materials such as staples are removed from it. To manufacture paper in second last step, the last ink impressions and glues are removed and this process is termed as "de-inking". In the final step, the cleaned paper is finally passed to a paper making machine to produce the usable paper.

Saturday 10 August 2019

Ielts writing task 2: People get information through news and paper but meanwhile are uncertain about the truth of these news

Question: Nowadays, people get information through news and papers but meanwhile are uncertain about the truth of these news. Should we believe the journalist? What qualities should be a good journalist or correspondent have?


Answer:


News help us to remain up-to-date with the world and these are received from various modes a few are television, radio and internet. In this technological era, a piece of information spreads like a wildfire that people have become skeptical, and this human nature is giving rise to a moot question of trusting the journalist or not.

A journalist who is responsible for showing the true picture of the society is not free from the blot. A news reader can be misguided by the false or exaggerated news given by a journalist. Moreover, in this materialistic era, people want the whole nine yards and this greed can be fulfilled only with money. Money which is given in excess to journalist who praise and show only the positive sides of a particular political party. Simply, they become puppets of the parties and try to create a white collar image of them. So, people should not blindly believe on the news but should analyse and understands news from different facets to extract the actual matter as today's journalist are famous for making a mountain out of a mole hill.

Journalism is not everyone's cup of tea. There are many challenges in this field. A person who wants to be a journalist needs to be brave to overcome these obstacles as people bribe them to change their news and to make them speakers of the party. A reporter should be unbiased to portray the actual picture of the person or the situation. People are introduced to different topics by the journalist so a journalist should be well versed with myriad topics and even if he does not know about something then he should have the curiosity to learn different things. Above all, command over language is needed as an orator who can convey properly can touch a millions of heart and make his point crystal clear in the receiver's mind.

Contemplating all the aforementioned points, I would like to say that journalist should work with dignity and be loyal to their profession as their news have a profound effect on people's mind and they are playing an important part in shaping the society we live in.

Tips: Journalism is the fourth pillar of the successful democracy. The other three being the legislature, executive and the judiciary.
A journalist, like the judge, like an umpire must be unbiased and totally impartial to any group.