Writing task 2- An increase in price of junk food will reduce the number of obese people.

Question: Recent studies have shown that overweight people trend to eat junk food that are high in unhealthy fats. Some people argue that an increase in  price of such foods will serve as a deterrent and thus reduce the number of overweight people. Do you agree and disagree?

Answer:- 

In this modern and cut throat competitive world, people have altered themselves to work, round the clock. This new lifestyle has given rise to a number of health problems and amongst these obesity is considered to be the most fatal one. This is thought to be increasing due to consumption of fast food. So to hold the fist in this problem, rise in price is suggested. But I think, this is not the pragmatic solution due to a lot of reasons.

Firstly, the people who are habitual of eating fast food will not change their taste because old habits die hard. A person who has accustomed himself to a particular eating habit will not be able to resist himself as his body will demand these. Moreover, daily intakers will not care about the price because their taste and satisfaction matter a lot. This can be easily justified by taking an example of fuel price in India. Today,  a liter of petrol costs about Rs 90 but this deep hole in pockets is not bothering people as driving their own private vehicle has become their lifestyle and is considered no more a luxury but a need.

Further, it is scientifically proven that obesity is not because of fast food but can be caused by the genetic problems. As it is often observed that a kid of obese parents often overweight. Finally, these junk food restaurants are supporting millions of families because this industry has given work to myriad waiters, chefs and managers. Expensive food stuff will bring a darker era in this industry and will make many jobless.

At the tip of the iceberg, increase in the price of any commodity of a man is not the right solution. Increased rates of junk food will not stop people from purchasing these, but can create a rage in them against government as for them, it may be a restriction on their freedom right. Authorities need to promote healthy lifestyle in order to make people fit and fine.

Ielts Writing Task 2

Rather than promoting the quality of products advertisements encourage consumers to buy the product in bulk.

Answer:

Advertisements are becoming ubiquitous as earlier these were found in newspaper and televisions but no a person can see these on the roads or even on their social networks. The prime aim of these is to show the characteristics of products but folks assert these urge people to purchase many products at the same time rather than single product which is their need. I concur to the statement tat they are promoting the qualities of good because of many factors that I would like to elaborate further.

Today, people are literate, they know about their actual needs. This is the reason that they are no longer lured by the false adverts that make mountain out of mole hill. Folks select the products by looking at its components rather than its face value. This is the reason that promoters today are showing the actual face of the product as they know persuading intelligent mind is quite a tough job.

Further, to leave a positive mark on consumes mind, distinct marketing strategies are used. Like to prove the effectiveness of hair oil "Indu Rekha", an oil brand reveal its scientific testing in its advertisement. Moreover, many successful business entities know quality brings the goodwill for the company. If they sell, products of cheap quality, their customers will not come back and to stay in business, one has to retain customers to suggest their good quality products to others and do mouth advertisement.

All in all, advertisements are important to reveal the features of products. Its people who need to analyse their needs and purchase accordingly.

Ielts writing task 2 - Team activities can teach more skills for life than activities which are played alone.

Question:-

Team activities can teach more skills for life than activities which are played alone.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.


Learning is a life long process from cuddle to grave. In the life span, a person learns from parents, peers, teacher and even from group works or solo works. Many people hold the view that solo works teach more to an individual than team work. But I and many other people contradict this notion and back the opposite view.

Firstly, man is a social animal who has been working in the groups to ensure its survival like hunting animals in jungle to get food for community since the immemorial. Moreover, this venture inculcates a sense of belongingness in the people's mind. It teaches them the value of unity. For instance, India's freedom is not because of a single individuals but because of the efforts of the numerous freedom fighters.

Further, this work teaches sharing, caring and an ability to understand feeling and opinion of others which is next to impossible in an individual's work. A person who works in a team becomes more adaptable and this is the need of the hour as more and more employers are selecting candidates who have mastered this trait and can easily mold themselves in any shape. So this work not only helps them personally but also professionally by giving them employment.

A man who works individually may get the authority to take decisions but he will have less options to select from. Whereas, in team work, many minds work together giving rise to a spectrum of innovative ideas and solutions of a problem. So, the group work not only makes a person creative but also gives the chance to learn from others' experience.

To sum up, the team works are more beneficial for people owing to its myriad advantages. One should always prefer this as together people can stand strong and single stick can be broken easily.

Ielts Letter Writing

Question:- A good friend has just changed school and is having difficulty fitting in and needs tour advice. Write a letter to your friend in your letter:- make suggestions as to how they could make friends- suggest joining club, participating in school activities- give any extra general advice

Dear 

Answer:

Dear Steven

I have read your letter and I am very surprised to read that a garrulous and extrovert person like you is not getting involved in the new environment and not having a single friend even after a week since joining new school.

Steven, you were the star of our school group and you can easily mold yourself in different situations. Your charming personality and positive outlook seems  to be faded as you were not in the favor of this shift. But my friend do not worry, we need to change with the time. You can impress and become friend with people with your these two traits and do not forget your sense of humor. Try to approach people rather than waiting for them to come first.

You can easily find like minded people in the games courts or in the theater. Moreover, you can participate in competitions and cultural activities. There group work will help you to talk with people and learn about their perspectives. 

Further, Steven you need to go slow as people take time to accept new persons. You can help them in their homework, share your knowledge and remember you are a very good cook. Use your culinary skills tactfully.

I hope these suggestions will boost your confidence and your next letter will include many stories of your new friends.

Yours truly

Amanpreet kaur 

Question: More and more students choose to go to another country for their higher studies. Do you thing the benefit outweigh the problems associated with it?

Answer: Acquiring higher education in another country has become a a trend and some are the days when parents were afraid of sending their kids alone to another nation. Today, people think that developed countries offer more benefits to the learners of higher education should be completed there. Indeed, this has many advantages but a few disadvantages it offer cannot be neglected.
In most first world countries, curriculum is totally based on practical knowledge not solely developed around theoretical information. As in most underdeveloped countries or in developing countries like India and Pakistan, tutors test a pupil's bookish knowledge not the practical experience that is required actually in working sector. Another reason o moving to another country is, job opportunities which are available in some countries and in other, many experienced people do not have jobs.
Choice of country for doing higher education depends upon the economy of the nation as well. Higher economies give a sense of security to a person that's why people dream to get their masters degree from the USA and Canada. Not only it offers professional security but also gives an individual a chance to learn from others. They learn to share, co-operate, mix with people of other race an creed. This gives them a chance to enjoy different festivals like, a Punjabi in Canada celebrates 'Gurupurab' Sikh festival and Halloween , a Christian festival.
In the bright side of a lamp, its dull side cannot be ignored. A person who lives away from his family feels isolated and sometimes becomes a patient of depression and stress. But this problem can be easily resovled by becoming one of the native people, while in Rome, do as Romans do.
At the tip of iceberg, benefits and drawbacks are two facets of a thing. The few problems with higher education in another country cannot devalue its numerous benefits so learners should study in another countries to gain knowledge and to get acquainted with others' life style and culture.